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20AE#1999
07-14-2007, 12:45 AM
it was me
http://i92.photobucket.com/albums/l2/aedub1999/tp4.jpg
my step daughter Emily
http://i92.photobucket.com/albums/l2/aedub1999/tp5.jpg
and we went here
http://i92.photobucket.com/albums/l2/aedub1999/tp6.jpg
and saw some crabs(here is one)
http://i92.photobucket.com/albums/l2/aedub1999/tp1.jpg
and here are just a couple more pics
http://i92.photobucket.com/albums/l2/aedub1999/tp3.jpg
http://i92.photobucket.com/albums/l2/aedub1999/tp2.jpg
Now this is my first attempt at editing photos and I am useing a trial editer. It is Corel Paint Shop Pro Photo XI. Please tell me how I can improve. Thanks in advance.:)

20AE#1999
07-16-2007, 07:05 PM
so really, no one has anything to say about my photos? I know I am not good and I was expecting some feedback so I can maybe improve.
Anyone?
Anyone?:confused:

wikedgolf
07-16-2007, 07:32 PM
nice job.. i almost didnt see the crab...
ur little girl is super cute!

SYNYSTAGLI
07-16-2007, 07:37 PM
I really don't feel I'm at the point to critique as I'm fairly new at photography as well, but here goes....
#1, #2 they look like great snapshots bro.
#3 I'd crop the bottom more and clone out or crop off the left side cause it's distracting.
#4 Id crop in more to the crab.
#5 is the best out of the bunch for me, I'd crop a bit from the bottom.
#6 doesn't really do much for me, maybe if the angle wasn't there and there was alot of shadows going on...

All of this is just my opinion, take it like a grain of salt as I'm a beginner as well. Keep shooting bro ;)

Brk4Euros
07-16-2007, 08:16 PM
good stuff!

MrFast4Ward
07-16-2007, 08:52 PM
One tip: don't shoot in auto-mode, for day pics, use Aperture-priority and for night/motion use shutter speed-priority until you can handle full manual.

Doing this will give your pics more dramatic impact and better composition overall.

Example of results with "A" priority:

http://www.fast-4ward.com/data/media/49/P4146383.JPG